fekyo Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 (edited) ok so this is the newest tune ive been working on last night. want to finish it off tonight, but i want a load of opinions/critism before i do the final cut. http://soundcloud.com/fekyo/unfinished-dubgrime -CMON PEOPLE LISTEN AN COMMENT I NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM BEFORE I FINALISE THIS RIDDIM. WHATS WRONG/DOESNT SOUND RIGHT? BREAKS TOO LONG? TOO ROBOTIC AT 1.36? SHOULD IT BE LONGER? LONGER CHORUSES??? COMMENT... if anyones interested im using fruity loops 8 xxl producer edition, and if you wana hear any of my other work just ask fekyo. edit: btw its not stayin instrumental it will have grime bars over the top Edited February 22, 2010 by fekyo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt86 Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 I find that a bit irritating after a while sorry mate... the bass and beat is alright but the tune is very simple and not very good and after about a minute I got bored of the beats and bass. I think I listened to something of yours before though and this is alot better... also I know this kind of stuff isnt easy. I sat trying to make a track with my mate and got bored after about 2 hours.... time alot of time and thought really Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JC Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 rhythm is way out IMO..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wwwd Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 I'm going to get flamed for this, but I quite liked it! I've already given it a few listens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeeWee Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 Rythm tracks out, weak instruments & repetitive im afraid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fekyo Posted February 22, 2010 Author Share Posted February 22, 2010 MATT86 AND LORD: what would you change? WWWD: cheers. here my 2nd most recent one, bit more grime scene. 99% done. this one defo needs lyrics tho... http://soundcloud.com/fekyo/dirt-grime-instrumental-remix but i want critism of the 1st tune!!! join my youtube channel for more: gofeknks PEEWEE: what ya mean rythm tracks out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeeWee Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 Its not in time with the rest of the tune I mean, although ill admit im not into grime so maybe thats the point of it but I have spent many years producing at home & in the studio. Im fully qualified in this area. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fekyo Posted February 22, 2010 Author Share Posted February 22, 2010 what software you using? ive been using fl studio 8 for a little now, but ill admit i probably only know about 5% of its capabilitys, if that. some more precise critism with like at how many seconds in, this sounds out, etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trickydicky Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 Its not in time with the rest of the tune I mean, although ill admit im not into grime so maybe thats the point of it but I have spent many years producing at home & in the studio. Im fully qualified in this area. There isn't anything out of time there PeeWee. Fekyo you need something else in there, something a bit more chorusy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeeWee Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 Hard to determine how many milliseconds its out tbh just from the wave you supplied.I use cubase 5, Reason 4 and lots of various vsti instrument & vst plugins. I use hardware effects units & keyboard too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fekyo Posted February 22, 2010 Author Share Posted February 22, 2010 TRICKY: can you reccomend something? i didnt think anything was out either. will have to zoom in and have a closer look cheers for feedback so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeeWee Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 Its not in time with the rest of the tune I mean, although ill admit im not into grime so maybe thats the point of it but I have spent many years producing at home & in the studio. Im fully qualified in this area. There isn't anything out of time there PeeWee. Fekyo you need something else in there, something a bit more chorusy. Like I said Im not aware how grime should sound, maybe its supposed to be off tempo?I do have quite a trained ear & plenty of years experience in this field though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fekyo Posted February 22, 2010 Author Share Posted February 22, 2010 how many seconds in does what sound out? peewee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craig855S Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 I liked it, bar the echoey part after 3 minutes, that just didnt sound right. Other than that though it's good. Wouldnt mind listening to it through a decent sound system. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeeWee Posted February 22, 2010 Share Posted February 22, 2010 how many seconds in does what sound out? peeweeIts not seconds mate, I would need the multitrack to know for certain.Ill have to knock something together for you to show you what type of style & quality I make myself. Im always willing to help any way I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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